Nice armor design, and nice corruption design on the character. When I first saw your armor and cloth color choices, I was wondering why you went for colds and silvers when your character was so clearly on the side of dark. It was only in reading your first post that I realized they're supposed to be on the side of Light. I don't think that part - the ambiguity about which side she's on - is going to help you. As the FAQ notes,
Q: Is it okay to have a mix of light and dark?
A: No, you’ll have to choose one topic. Ambiguous entries will be at a disadvantage.
Perhaps going with a much darker armor color, or showing the the armor also corrupted might help? Good luck with it!