Portfolio: https://dannypavlov.carbonmade.com doesnt work too well on phones.
My aim, even though it's currently way out of my reach, is doing freelance illustrations for companies like Paizo. Until recently I didn't have a clear goal so the works in the portfolio are random, so that's one thing I am working on fixing. I'm not sure exactly what I want critiqued specifically since at this point I cant spot the mistakes, not because I think there aren't any but because I've stared at it (the 'folio) that I cant tell what they are.
I guess I want to know what you guys think is a problem that is consistent in the works or an area I need to improve the most in.
By the way if it's not ok to post links to portfolios, I'll delete it.