Awesome painting! I don't know if I'm fit for providing criticism, but a few issues I notice with the piece before and after the last two revisions is that she seems to be looking past the eyes of the other subject, instead of in them. It almost has an appearance of her being closer towards the pov than the other subject, giving it a jarring look, and giving the appearance of looking past him. No clue if this was intentional or not. Some details from the previous rendition also had a more aesthetically pleasing look to them than the new piece, with the smoother blending and less texture overall in this piece, along with the change of the ponytail to the clip in the hair, and the lacing of the shirt and the colouring of it too, though this may be bias due to seeing the third rendition as the "original". But little details like that made it appear more realistic and gave it more character. Still, none the less, beautiful painting and many improvements from the third version!