looks quite nice to this point. her hair is really awesome.
but some things i noticed are, that the right shoulder sticks out very much ( in this perspective it has to hide more behind the torso and the breasts), the right arm is also way thicker and longer than the left. and the jacket and the shoulder armor doesn't look like its wrapping around the body, so it lacks form.generally speaking the armor has to wrap more around the body, so it looks more 3d.
i know its an early WIP and i don't know if you already know it but thats at least what i noticed