Welcome to my thread:))
Maybe you can write in your mother tongue and by some miracle i understand it?
I agree about the texture but i don't know how to fix it-i did try to distort it and paint over, as you see, it didn't really work...
Do you mean the one on the shape itself or do you also mean the one on the "floor"?
That's the course i'm taking (not with teacher's feedback)! Join and we'll be sort of class mates:D
General recipe for critique is: start nice, point to the negative, wrap it up with a positive comment. I think there is a more thorough explanation in general section of the forums. The way you did it, works for me, so just keep at it;)
Tnx for the help!