I actually like the face a lot, with just a bit more detail it will be awesome. I like the lashes on the left eye more, on the right one seems
I like the colours on the top one in your previous post, the purple-white-brown one more than the green one, but I guess we disagree on that one since you've chosen to continue working on the green design
The back view on the purple one (the top one in your previous post) seems a bit asymmetrical to me, the butt cheek closer is smaller than the one that's farther back. Other than that, it looks nice.
About the hair - I think it could do with a bit more detail on the separate segments, to emphasize they're made of tiny little hairs as they look more solid right now. Here's a similar style ref I think works: