Thanks! I was quite happy with my Jun attempt too, youre definitely right about the black accents, I should have sprinkled a few more about the place.
I agree, Ognjen also reminds me of bridgeman which is probably why i am attracted to their artstyle.
Good point about my attempt with Rution, I think that is my weakest attempt of the bunch when trying to apply the style to another piece. I for some reason find it much harder to construct with triangular/angular shapes and sometimes default back to squares without realising it. I will try this one again down the line : )
I appreciate the critique, it is always motivating having people help me on throughout this journey : )