Sep '21

I really like the scene for both pieces. Perhaps adding some more shadow to certain parts such as the limbs, to add depth to the characters. They appear a little flat in places.

Sep '21

Thanks for the feedback. I will work on the flat areas. Do you feel like the insectoids in the second picture seem like a threat? Should there be fewer yet bigger ones?

Oct '21

Hello there, sorry for the late response. There appears to be enough of them from my point of view and as far as I can tell they do look threatening. If you want to improve them. I would look at more reference of insect anatomy or designs.

Oct '21

I appreciate you coming back. My experience with art peer forums is that I am lucky to get one response, aside from two. That is not a helpful trend for artists not in school or in group meet-ups.

Thanks very much, Willem.

Oct '21

You're welcome, its great to have someone to talk to about art.

Oct '21

Hello,

First off, great job at both pictures. My main critique is that in the second picture, Dandelion feels stiffer compared to Geralt in their posture. It feels as if Dandelion is running with his back stiff straight with his pose while Geralt feels as if he has that traditional lean forward in your body when running to prepare for the next move.

11 days later

Oct '21

Thanks, Josue. I see what you mean and I understand how that happened with the self reference used for that pose.