I wanted to save this url it somehow helped me understand all my flaws (or maybe soem of them^^) in one go.
Its "onepixelbrush" company's hiring page so if its somehow offending any rule let me know and I will remove.
The important part is the Do's and Dont's
Really love your female characters. The first is coming along really well. Only critique I really have is that it's really desaturated at the moment. No really striking color that makes the character pop. But I assume you'll do that as you push it further. I enjoy the second one a lot.
If you don't mind me asking, What is it that you want to do with your art career? Assuming you want to be an illustrator. I can see your work in Legend of the Cryptids or other games with fantasy illustrations. Keep up the good work. Look forward to updates.
Thank you Malcom.
I want to experiment with colors and tbh I feel more comfortable with greys. but I will try to push it to my expectation which is this:
I aim for LoC quality since I draw so much inspiration from those artworks. Lately Ive been commisioned to draw covers for indie authors. My main occupation is being an accountant and I dont know if I can ever swich careers. I aim to be really good so I can make this happen. Thank you for your concern^^
I noticed you mentioned something about doing freelance, and seeing the growing multitude of mainly "female almost to no" clothing artworks , from other artists, maybe you could add more variations so others can now what other stuff you can do.
Unless of course, you like doing what you already doing. Overall solid stuff though, don't have anything to critique about the fundamentals aside from keep on painting.
I believe you can make it. Your work is really well done. Even though there's always room for improvement, you getting commissions which in itself is a great thing. Just continue doing good work and improving. Hopefully you snowball into being able to switch careers.
PS
Wow I actually really love crow god's work. I should study their work sometime. Also Whats you artstation?
Oh thank you! Its a long way there though T.T
Yeah, getting commissions was one way of improving fast and practice on stuff I wouldnt normally, like drawing men and modern clothes and backgrounds. Also i have found other applications of my art outside the game/fantasy realm which was nice.
This is my artstation:
I have this fascination with artists Ruan Jia and G.Huang. I am under the impression that their style developed from studying classical paintings. So I decided to start studying as well. I have avoided hard work studies but I guess its the only way to get better.
This is Edward Bisson 3 graces. No color picking or trace.

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WOW!
Great work!
Wondering if you could give me a hint on how you got on that skill level.
I have experience with traditional painting and drawing, I am skilled in vector illustrations (can send you via PM if you want to take a look) but somehow I can't make good work digitaly
Can you please give me some material that helped you grow your artistic skills?
Also, I see you come from Greece, greetings from Serbia