really fresh brushstrokes, they make the difference sometimes
wow thank you guys^^ im trying to focus on shapes more
wow these look amazing, i love the colors in the second one 
I keep avoiding hard work..i m going to blame the good weather
Awesome! =)
Really love the sketches lately. In the last one, the stomach looks weird. She looks she is sucking her stomach in or something. Legs might be a bit to long but then again she can be a really tall girl. Love her face in this one and hair in this one. Simple and clean values. Good use of brush strokes. Anatomy wise some things feel off.
I envy your faces. Always love them.
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really digging the book sketch thing i love how your balancing the cleaness on the face with all the other stuff on movement more messy, thats a really cool composition with attention on edges.
That last one is gorgeous.. I love the face!
Really liking this one. Would love to see you push this some more. Great start
Love the Spider. LMAO. 
All jokes aside, I'm liking what i'm seeing so far. Love the colors and atmosphere of the top image. The anatomy of the Main girl seems odd. Mainly the left arm and how it's position. Great start overall. Both are looking good so far.
Thank you Malcom! I set the colors first on the background and then on the characters and that seemed to work here. I am trying to preserve the initial sketch as much as I can so I dont loose the dynamic pose as it happens to me always but I will fix that weird arm eventually! thanks!
Loving the simplicity of your value sketches. Your brushstrokes are on point!
I really like the sketch of the 2 girls shopping 
like the overall atmosphere and especially the idea
Awesome work! Love the rendering style
Oh very nice! It's already coming along really well. I'm sooo excited to see the final result!
