16 days later
It's been a while since I posted, but I've been hard at work and have filled a full sketchbook from the last time I posted until now! Been practicing a LOT of gesture, anatomy, and structure. One of my next goals is to start learning about facial structure, but I wanted to get some critiques on some things I can improve on when it comes to how my current work. Any advice/critiques would be very appreciated 
Thanks for taking a look!
For improvement you could work on your line quality. I think that would help the read and the professionalism if the piece. Try making your curves and lines in one clean stroke.vif you don't get the angle right erase and try again. It will be worse at first but will pay off in the long run.
Thanks so much for the advice I'll try to work on that as I go into my next round of studies this week!
My update for this week! Have been working on studying anatomy of the body more and have put off working on faces. I feel like I got a much better understanding of torso anatomy even though its not perfect yet. I tried to work on my line quality from @Lockenheim 's suggestion and I feel like my lines have gotten a little more confident definitely not quite there yet. Any further critiques would be very appreciated Thanks so much for taking a look!
It looks like you have a good understanding of where the muscles of the torso go. I think you should work on your shoulders more because some of them look unproportionable to the rest of the torso. Keep up the good practice!
@Silver_io thanks so much for the advice Ill pay more attention to the shoulders in this week's practice!
Been working on more torso anatomy and I feel like these are definitely better than the last batch! I started to notice @Silver_io 's critique of the shoulder issues when I was creating these and have tried to fix up my neck and shoulder anatomy a bit. Critiques of my anatomy of the torso and general construction would be super appreciated
11 days later
Putting in more work on torso anatomy and doing more full body studies. I feel like my lines are slowly growing less sketchy, but still need to work on that more. Any critiques would be super appreciated
Nice constructions! Keep up the good work!
Thanks so much
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