ART WAR | 2D | Astral Yabusame | Max Davenport

mdaven_art 2017-01-04 08:31:11 UTC #21

@mandyberryart Thanks so much! Haha we're all in this. It's fun to see everyone's take on the subject so I'm sure you're gonna do great. Honestly, I think @nightblue-art hit it on the head with their feedback. Central props, more interesting flow, bold design choices: really push the envelope.

Progress! Almost finished with the front concept.

skullguzma 2017-01-04 09:00:53 UTC #22

You really seem to know what you're doing! I don't know if I could provide helpful feedback, i don't exactly have industry experience, but i feel like this guy would look super cool with a glowing pair of eyes.
It might not be your intention, but as of now he kind of feels like a really awesome mech that's lacking a pilot. Some eyes would make him feel autonomous. Although he looks really good regardless!

oten 2017-01-04 09:03:43 UTC #23

I really like you painting style, and your character too!
Can't wait to see more of your work ^^

Crayvv 2017-01-04 10:34:21 UTC #24

I totally agree with @skullguzma, I think he needs a pair of eyes, that way you can make him have a bit of personality and kind of have a representation of intelligence, unless you really want to make him a pilotable mech, this is just my opinion, but still it's amazing either way! So keep it up man I love the concept and your style very very much

mandyberryart 2017-01-04 19:24:24 UTC #25

thanks so much for the feedback and taking the time to look! cant wait to see more of your work

mdaven_art 2017-01-04 22:40:03 UTC #26

Haha could be fun. I think I want to keep a sense of anonymity to this guy. I'm going to push the scale in the illustration so I'm not going to imply this guy is actually person sized.

bazuzu 2017-01-04 22:44:23 UTC #27

Amazing!!! Cool design!

leblancalexandre3d 2017-01-04 23:27:58 UTC #28

dude thats sick

nevs38 2017-01-05 04:19:06 UTC #29

BEAUTIFUL WORK!!! amazing celestial feel to it!

mdaven_art 2017-01-05 05:40:23 UTC #30

@bazuzu @leblancalexandre3d @nevs36 Thanks you guys! I'm hoping the front concept is pretty much done. I'm going to do a sketch back view with breakouts for the rest of the model sheet.

kinonato 2017-01-05 07:55:12 UTC #31

Please imagine me singing:

EVERYTHING IS AWESOME~~~

aram 2017-01-05 13:55:41 UTC #32

Amazing design! I really like the space fabric.

Georgie 2017-01-05 14:08:10 UTC #33

LOVING where this is going!

rgdraw 2017-01-05 14:15:01 UTC #34

Really great work !
Is he Zeynatta's big brother ? xD

magichead 2017-01-05 14:35:45 UTC #35

Really awesome design and rendering. I am surely not on your skill level but i feel like his right hand is a little hard to read over the clothing since they have such similar values and hues. Besides that i can't wait to see more!

mdaven_art 2017-01-05 16:22:09 UTC #36

Thanks you guys :). Feeling the love

@magichead No, you're correct on that, it is hard to read. The hand is also too small when you compare it to the other one haha. I'll tweak some stuff before I start the illustration. Thanks for the heads up. Good call!

jjwil76 2017-01-06 16:11:10 UTC #37

Gorgeous work!

mavkrogan 2017-01-06 17:23:29 UTC #38

This is quite a humbling experience for me... Amazing work!

grigouips 2017-01-08 00:34:09 UTC #39

Wow that thread is epic...

berrysquare 2017-01-09 11:38:01 UTC #40

Wow! I think your drawings are very well done and the character design is unique, great work!