I figured it's time to get started with my submission.
G.I.B (Galactic infantry Battle ) Unit
Mission : Deliver peace documents to the fantasy realm. Possible assassins threaten these talks on both sides of this war.
Jan 19, '17
Mar 9, '17
14 days later
My job has had me really busy over the last couple of weeks. I've finally managed time to progress more.
Here is concept sheet progress.
the character and tumbnails look great! Good luck!
Berry, Thanks!!. Will be posting more final illustrations soon
Progress looks great!
Thanks Berry! Hoping I can get this lighting right though
Nice work! I'd suggest giving your character a little more room to breathe in the composition currently; a nice trick is to get the head lined up with the top third to give the focal point room the breathe. I'd also be careful with your values and contrast, currently it's very easy to lose your character in the background so maybe try and separate your values a little more.
If you want some reading material to really help you with composition definitely check out Framed Ink by Marcos Mateu-Mestre. Incredible book on compositional theory and storytelling!
Thanks adamostridge! I see what you mean about the composition and values. Will get these finalized before I move to much further into color. Plan on ordering the book soon. Thanks for the resource.
Does anyone know if its true that the deadline has been extended for another day?
The G.I.B (Galactic Infantry Battle)Unit
Christopher Hagens
chagensworks@outlook.com
Well I realized that I disqualified myself by not adding one concept sheet, amongst many flaws in the final illustration. I will continue on this one, most likely in critique thread or artblog.
