ART WAR | 2D | Human-Crab (Dark) | furichella

sanguine 2017-12-31 06:13:46 UTC #22

I like the lighting setup. Just needs some cold shadows:)

furichella 2017-12-31 09:39:42 UTC #23

furichella 2017-12-31 09:50:40 UTC #24

Probably you are right, @alexbrewer2238 ! I think I must to make more thumbnails to select the composition and the story.

furichella 2017-12-31 09:53:46 UTC #25

Yes , @sanguine! warm light - cold shadows! I must always keep it in my mind.

jonatan-moonchild 2017-12-31 10:43:06 UTC #26

I like it! Design is great and I like the pose in final image set. I would change one thing there - pull the whip a bit to the side and back so it would be more visible and stand out (right now it blends a bit with overall silhouette), which would be great because it is an ass-kicking whip! It would also add more dynamism. Additionaly if the camera would be lower then the character would appear bigger (if that is yor goal).

But overall I like it a lot! Keep it up!

Regards
Jonatan

evehartman 2017-12-31 12:07:22 UTC #27

I really like your concept and no worries, at first it always looks better in your head Although I really like the colour scheme for your character, perhaps mix some cool contrasting/complementing tones (like a cool purple tone?) in the background to make your champion stand out.

furichella 2017-12-31 14:52:41 UTC #28

@jonatan-moonchild , @evehartman Thanks a lot for your advice! I appreciate it !

furichella 2018-01-05 21:01:57 UTC #29

well i have changed everything... now it's a cave

malcom 2018-01-06 06:43:19 UTC #30

This looks lot better than the first go around. I like the spiral composition you have going so so far.

furichella 2018-01-06 11:42:19 UTC #31

Thank you, @Malcom! )

simic1 2018-01-06 23:56:57 UTC #32

It looks better with the colors a bit dimmed down like the last one. Else the reddish tint reminded me of cooked crabs.
Love how well you made the exoskeleton. Great work overall!

furichella 2018-01-07 14:30:16 UTC #33

thank you, @simic1 ! I agree, my crab is not for food))

evehartman 2018-01-07 14:32:09 UTC #34

Yes nice work! The green/blue tones work really well

furichella 2018-01-07 17:07:19 UTC #35

I'm glad you like it, @evehartman !))

douglasderi 2018-01-07 17:17:26 UTC #36

Cool idea, i just think that you have too much empty space, try to bring him close to the viewer, and fill the gaps with some story, or elements that complete him.

good luck to your character

furichella 2018-01-07 20:54:04 UTC #37

thank you, @douglasderi! Yes, I would like to add splashes of lava, cracks and stalactites to fill an empty space ..