ART WAR | 2D | Nashtar | Rgdraw

borjengoh 2017-02-07 17:09:29 UTC #121

Its coming together pretty good now! I like her face expression!

Alexandra_K 2017-02-07 20:21:02 UTC #122

Wow, that looks awesome! Just went through all the previous posts, great progress. Loving the details of the armour especially.

rgdraw 2017-02-07 23:06:32 UTC #123

Hum...Thanks ? Be careful how you write things because I feel like you're insulting me but not intentionnaly so it's a bit awkward x)
But I take note of what you're saying and I'll see what i can do

rgdraw 2017-02-07 23:07:58 UTC #124

@borjengoh @alexk And thank you guysm really glad you like it

Khulim 2017-02-07 23:50:27 UTC #125

looks good man! i'd just suggest a little more detail in the horse face

mr_dessin 2017-02-08 00:50:59 UTC #126

The thing that really bother me, maybe I'm the only one...but the value of your left tree looks to be a bit too strong...just fade it with some nice green (kinda like you did on the bottom tree) or something like that

And I'm not sure about the bird...each time I try to look at Nashtar, my eyes always are distracted by him/her !

But hey, just some little suggestions here, do what you want with it man
I know feedbacks are cool but when there is too much....not easy ^^'

Good luck !

rgdraw 2017-02-08 11:10:01 UTC #127

@Khulim Thanks I'll try that, iwas thinking maybe add a different color, like a white spot or something

@mr_dessin I'll see what i can do, that tree bother me a bit too and I'm still note sure of what to do with it
For the bird i thought we didn't see it enough xD I'll try to put it somewhere else

yorieofthecastle 2017-02-08 15:39:27 UTC #128

I was actually very cheerful! Sorry if I didn't manage to get it across correctly, text and stuff ~(^O^)~

rgdraw 2017-02-08 18:22:17 UTC #129

It's ok man, but be careful, you might came accross somebody that won't understand one day

rgdraw 2017-02-09 00:12:58 UTC #130

Putting the illsutration on stand by while gathering everyone advices
So I'm working on the concept sheet, with the special moves and skills of the character

evevera 2017-02-09 01:08:29 UTC #131

Ended up looking great! Just wondering what 3d program you used for the earlier concept pieces?

jenniferbrincho 2017-02-09 01:59:15 UTC #132

Nice layout of the concept sheet! I like how you showed your final choices with the green slashes. The special moves section is cool too, though I'd personally like to see the character instead of stick figures That's just me, though. Keep up the good work!

rgdraw 2017-02-09 14:59:31 UTC #133

Thanks a lot !

@evevera : For the early concept I used Daz3D, it's pretty cool for posing a character and it's the only 3D program I can use on my computer xD

@jenniferbrincho Don't worry it won't stay like that, I just wanted to show quickly there will be a special move section

And thanks again

berrysquare 2017-02-12 19:52:17 UTC #134

I have missed a lot of progress. The final is amasing. Composition is strong and the drawing skill just epic!

rgdraw 2017-02-12 22:31:56 UTC #135

Thank you very much !!

rgdraw 2017-02-12 23:36:21 UTC #136

Progress on the concept sheet, almost done !

zazzycreates 2017-02-13 01:35:23 UTC #137

This perspective is really good

rgdraw 2017-02-13 10:42:05 UTC #138

Thanks a lot

rgdraw 2017-02-13 15:11:49 UTC #139

Concept sheet finished, I hope everything reads properly
Then getting back to the illustration to make all the correction!

bohemiannihil 2017-02-14 10:34:13 UTC #140

In the main illustration, the design and the surface of the armour is really stunning! : )