ART WAR | 2D or 3D | Spirit | berrysquare

wutom 2017-02-13 09:00:19 UTC #21

Amazing! From the bodies I like the 5th design because it looks really athletic and feels like it could carrie out some action rich missions xD
Regarding the clothes I love the third design (if the character designt goes more towards a cool fighter robot) x) The clothing feels like it fits the overall theme and period when it takes place.

nevs38 2017-02-13 09:05:59 UTC #22

DUDE! this is quite interesting
Immediately i got this idea about the 4th design .. ( open coat/jacket .. revealing his skeletal frame ) ...
-- Transparent plastic jacket .. so you see his frame but partially through his jacket .. frosted texture or something ?
His face can have boyish features .. but not realistic at all ... what do you think?

Check these out!

This was what i had in mind
http://stylebubble.co.uk/style_bubble/2012/01/plastic-fantastic.html

-- Also ... Check this out ... his work is INSANE! .. how about something minimalistic, bold colors ?
https://grivetart.artstation.com/projects

berrysquare 2017-02-13 20:08:07 UTC #23

@kaleydoskope Hahaha yeah, now that you mention he does looke like he is trying hard xD
@wutom Thanks! Yeag I agree the 5th one really looks like hes fast and strong. I will try to see if I can make this work for the idea I have. There are details going to be added, like clothes, so not sure how much will be seen in the end. But thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it!

berrysquare 2017-02-13 20:22:26 UTC #24

Wow, Thanks for the thorough fedback and ideas!
I am looknig for some clean nonrealistic face. I want to add some paint on he´s face and body... have to see if it works or not. But the transparent raincoat/jacket idea is very interesting, it made me thing maybe to change my idea to cyber punk themed sci-fi. That reminds me I haven´t posted the story or the idea I have for the robot. Its a lot different than most people expect, but who knows.
Ohh wow, this Grivet guy is amazing! I, would love to have something minimalistic and cool like this!

berrysquare 2017-02-13 20:27:14 UTC #25

Ok, renderd the robot with jackets a bit more to see if it works and what to change. Still lot to try out before making the final choice.

mr_dessin 2017-02-13 21:58:19 UTC #26

First and second could be fun because well, we know he is entirely robot like that
Good luck to choose !

justartress 2017-02-13 22:04:32 UTC #27

Hi! You know, your art is cool))) I really enjoy it ^-^

justartress 2017-02-13 22:05:21 UTC #28

Nice clothes -

berrysquare 2017-02-13 22:24:31 UTC #29

@mr_dessin I thik you are apsolutely right! I like these myself also
@justartress Thank you so much!!! (O///O)

kaleydoskope 2017-02-13 23:38:17 UTC #30

I like the 4th :_) but also the opened jacket idea is cool

nevs38 2017-02-14 00:05:21 UTC #31

Really neat dude \m/
First one is my top choice !

joshculpart 2017-02-14 03:49:21 UTC #32

Cool and creepy and cute.

You've honestly got such a clean and readable aesthetic here. Makes it easy to picture an entire IP revolving around these robots. Solid personality in those faces too.

I like the direction you're going in. I'm interested to see how you render and color this thing.

dzzy 2017-02-14 16:56:18 UTC #33

I love this guy!! I am a fan of #3! Have you thought about maybe adding some subtle tribel-esc (like some of the imagery from your reference board) patterning to the poncho? Overall though I love the design of your robot!

berrysquare 2017-02-14 20:57:30 UTC #34

@kaleydoskope @nevs36 Cool I was planing to use the opened jacket guy, so I am glad you guys think the same way.

berrysquare 2017-02-14 21:02:10 UTC #35

@joshculpart Thanks! I have to see how it will work out, I am not very good with render and color xD
@ Thanks you so much! I am planning to add some tribal patterns on the robot. I am only affraid I might go to crazy with to many details. I guess have to try and see xD

knifeinhiscrown 2017-02-16 01:03:35 UTC #36

This is fantastic, keep up the good work, I'll be following along!

berrysquare 2017-02-17 19:55:30 UTC #37

Thanks! I will be looking at your progress also!

berrysquare 2017-02-17 20:06:53 UTC #38

Ok, the time has come to add colors to see what details I can add or how many. It still looks really rough, but gives an idea whats going on with the idea. Tthe story is that the robot is very nature friendly, and thats why one of the concepts has some tribal neck peaces. In my head I have some idea with that, but it dosen´t want to work on the design. What do you guys think? Do you have any ideas how to approach this idea?

nevs38 2017-02-18 05:47:59 UTC #39

First one is my top choice ..
The orange paint work and funny eyes.
Was wondering though...
How about an orange jacket as well to match the paint work ..?

berrysquare 2017-02-18 12:52:15 UTC #40

I like the first and the fourth one. I haven´t made any eyes or correct face yet. Its just paint on the body. I will go more into detail now. The orange jacket is interesting idea, but wouldn´t it go to oragne?