It's looking a lot better, my only advice though is, you gotta put more darker shadows, put more contrast on the face or any focal points you want. put a little vignette as well. I know this isnt the final render, but right now, I cant really tell where the light comes from, my trick here when I get to this point is to shade areas and experiment, just put big brushes down on the area you think should be in shadow, especially the farthest parts from the camera I hope this helps!
The character is looking pretty clean and really well painted, good job
However, I agree with @Khulim, the snake looks a bit awkward in the scene and unaware of whatever the main character is facing. I think changing it to a more menacing pose facing the viewer would be better.
Also, when detailing the background, I suggest to keep the values in mind, both foreground and background are mostly in the same range.
Other than that, keep up the good work
@alykam Thanks for the feedback! I'll experiment a little bit with the snake. I'm trying to have a Sylvester vs Tweety bird comedic relationship happening. Since it's not instantly apparent I'll try to modify it to make it better.I'm not finished up with the background just yet, but I'll try to keep it in mind.
@ajramsey thanks for the comment!
Thanks guys!