Thank you for the feedback! 
Yeah I agree with you, I'll keep exploring those two and see what comes of it. 
First and second, but i like the first more! cool designs tho, good luck
Thank you! I'll keep this in mind in further concepting.
8 days later
Update on the design! A very rough sketch so far, I think I am starting to get what I want from the thumbnails. She's supposed to not have any arms attached to her body, so the big arms will hover and was thinking she could do lots of cool stuff with the arms like sending them far away and kick peoples asses and such! Any feedback is welcome.
10 days later
looks cool! maybe you can try different palettes, even tho this one already looks good
Really liking it so far! Looking forward to where you take it
I love how her design ( the armor and such ) contrast with her innocent looking face. Also the idea of the detached arms is great.
Looking forward to the finished design.
Nice character and colours. Just triple check your perspective.
I don't know what will be your illustration but the golden parts on her shoulders might hinder her face. Just bend them a bit backward?
That's a good point, I will keep this in mind when I make the illustration!
Nice i like the colors, the only thing i'd say (from what has already been mentioned) is the chest looks very flat unless that was the plan / design choice, from the thumbnail above seems you had some volume there.
I still like this design apart from the small things you seen, congrats.
Ah yes, I see what you mean. I think if I add a cast shadow from where the gold shoulders start it will make it look like it lifts from the chest instead of flat on. Thanks for the feedback!
Might want to consider adding some element to her shoulders, that would explain how her arms are tethered to her body. This will look to be quite good, when you start illustrating so gogogogo Last 3 days!
Thank you! If you scroll up a bit I already have a rendered version with shoulder armor, but I think you're right. She might need some device there that's connected to the arms! Thanks for the tips :)!
