ART WAR 3 | 2D | Heroes | The Forgotten Rah bitt King | TaloS

tck 2018-12-09 00:53:38 UTC #7

just a lil composition crit, try and place Rah bit so he two thirds of the image, at the moment in 1,2 and 3 you could cut the image in half and basically see none of him in one of the halves.

As for the comps themselves, I love the stance in 2, maybe have a whole crowd of lil rabbits cheering him on

TaloS 2018-12-09 04:27:53 UTC #8

Thanks Tck! ill try to combine the first two into one more. i love your idea, ill try to put some little bunnys too!!.
Here are the weapons for the Rah bitt lord:

TaloS 2018-12-10 00:16:58 UTC #9

I have been doing the concept art for the design of the armor, and this was the result, i like the egiptian look of it:

TaloS 2018-12-10 00:20:20 UTC #10

I try to do a color test with some values and volumes applying the design!!

Im loving it xD

What do you think guys!

TaloS 2018-12-11 21:46:40 UTC #11

TaloS 2018-12-11 21:50:19 UTC #12

I like this new fix for the final composition. ill be doing the 4.

i choose that because it has all the elements that i want to show you, to tell the story of Rah Bitt!!

TaloS 2018-12-12 02:15:01 UTC #13

This is the result with details, tomorrow ill be doing a color test to begin with the final render

I hope you like it!

TaloS 2018-12-13 02:08:00 UTC #14

I im defining the layers first then i start to polish every layer so then i merge it and start the final render.

This is my progress so far:

TaloS 2018-12-13 02:11:19 UTC #15

mr_dessin 2018-12-13 07:35:04 UTC #16

3rd was having more impact than 4th maybe ?
Good luck !

TaloS 2018-12-17 03:54:32 UTC #17

This is the progres so far.

TaloS 2018-12-17 03:58:14 UTC #18

@mr_dessin Yes! the third is more dynamic, but the fourth lets me show certain details of the design, which in the third could not show.

thank you very much and equally

mr_dessin 2018-12-17 08:00:16 UTC #19

Oh yes I understand your concern...you're probably talking about the 80% appearance of our character...that is sure troublesome when we want to do something too much dynamic...
You're welcome and thank you !

TaloS 2018-12-18 04:22:54 UTC #20

lets go to the background now !

TaloS 2018-12-19 02:10:06 UTC #21

This is my progres so far, i almost finish i think, just rendering the details of the background.

TaloS 2018-12-19 02:24:39 UTC #22

I can see certain problems with the contrast of the rabbit with respect to the background, or maybe the background is very bright.

If you see any detail that could improve, I would be very grateful!

Tomorrow I will continue to fix them. Thank you very much to all!

mr_dessin 2018-12-19 07:17:08 UTC #23

Maybe put some fog so the background colours won't blend too much with your character.

TaloS 2018-12-20 04:22:58 UTC #24

This is the progress so far, i think is better now with more contrast to the rabit and the light is more accurate.

What do you think guys?

mr_dessin 2018-12-20 07:29:44 UTC #25

Nice progress !
It is getting more and more enjoyable : D
Although I like little rabbits on corner, they look a bit too much dark, no ?

TaloS 2018-12-21 05:45:56 UTC #26

This is the final result!!

I hope everything is fine now, and thanks for the support!!!! you guys helps me so much!!!

Thanks CubeBrush for the opportunity to share this funny drawing with you guys!

@malcom Can i submit my entry? i have finish it but i dont know how to submit the project. please can you help me? thanks a lot!