This is looking awesome so far! I think one thing to keep in mind is showcasing her superpower clearly. In one of your early posts you mentioned powers of divine light and flight, but afflicted with corruption, so maybe one tweak could be that you show the victims face when he's getting hit by the weapon and how the corruption is causing damage to him, or something like that.
I hope this doesn't come off as too nit-picky, I just know that part of the prompt is to clearly show what their powers are, and I would hate for you to miss some points on that during judging because you've been putting so much work into this. It's looking amazing!
