Thaïs | theo.saragas

theo.saragas 2020-01-23 17:41:00 UTC #7

Now that you say it, i see the disproportion x) I will fix that, and maybe think about a more dynamic pose. Thanks for the advice !

Oceane_Roh 2020-01-23 18:56:01 UTC #8

You're very welcome !

theo.saragas 2020-01-26 21:19:50 UTC #9

Hey ! I changed the composition to make the artwork more dynamic, I have already started painting. Hope you like this result

Oceane_Roh 2020-01-26 22:56:15 UTC #10

Oh hell yes ! I love the new pose so far ! You still have some issue with proportions, especially the legs. Generally speaking, the hip - knee is equal to the torso length

theo.saragas 2020-01-27 08:12:52 UTC #11

Should I go up her left leg ? or the one on her right leg ? Because for the right one, I wanted to make an effect where the leg is in perspective, as in a jump swing.
And thanks for the reply :3

Oceane_Roh 2020-01-27 08:23:15 UTC #12

Yeah I can see what you wanted to do, but long story short, the knee is too small, and the thigh too short. You should use simple 3d forms first, box or cylindrer to help you

theo.saragas 2020-01-27 08:44:22 UTC #13

Hmm okey thanks for the advice I'll see what I can do. I will correct that with liquify x)

theo.saragas 2020-01-27 17:14:39 UTC #14

theo.saragas 2020-01-28 19:03:24 UTC #15

theo.saragas 2020-01-30 07:29:23 UTC #16

I'll do the post-process for the character and then, i'll start the background

(i'll settle the proportion with liquify after)

Oceane_Roh 2020-01-30 07:53:14 UTC #17

Use liquify to do this is not something I would advise. It will be pretty hard to fix it this way but, your call. I just notice you also have an anatomy issue with the connection between the upper torso and the belly, the ribbings are a bit off.
Good render so far ! Keep going

theo.saragas 2020-01-30 11:30:04 UTC #18

I'll see that with anatomical reference, thanks I'll add the other feet also after the liquify.

theo.saragas 2020-01-31 09:42:14 UTC #19

nesokaiyoh 2020-01-31 15:44:32 UTC #20

Her thigh is far too short on the left there (her right leg), looks a little like it got chopped off a bit, it's a bit difficult to notice the transition between hips and legs as well, moving the legs down just a bit and giving her a hip shape will help that problem

theo.saragas 2020-01-31 19:19:00 UTC #21

Yes I see, I just fixed it, I will repost soon Thanks

theo.saragas 2020-01-31 22:08:29 UTC #22

Here's the final render ! i corrected the leg and finished the background. I will start the board of character with her story and different angles of Thaïs.
i will post all soon, here's my artstation and my instagram if you want to follow me
My Artstation : https://www.artstation.com/theosaragas
My instagram : https://www.instagram.com/theo_saragas/?hl=fr

sarsengo 2020-02-01 21:29:33 UTC #23

I LOVE THE MOVEMENT!!! keep it up!

theo.saragas 2020-02-03 10:51:38 UTC #24

I'm done with this challenge ! here's my story board.
So hard

nesokaiyoh 2020-02-03 15:27:12 UTC #25

Congratulations on finishing you did a wonderful job!

theo.saragas 2020-02-03 16:56:16 UTC #26

Thank you very much ! I saw your works and your character is awesome !