Good job so far !
Things to say, I agree with glubglubz and nesokaiyoh for the perspective. Also the serpent on the left look really weird, like a tadpole
This is looking great! However Both arms are looking a bit weird. Maybe look up reference images of olympic swimmer to see how their arms are placed while doing that pose. Her left arm seems like it's coming out of her neck and not the shoulder. And i think her right arm is a bit too small, although i see what you're trying to do with foreshortening. Maybe add in some atmospheric perspective on her right arm, trident, and back headpiece as well to give more depth. Good luck, looks awesome so far!
Ok guys. here i fixed, let me know, i also made a fisheye
@Oceane_Roh @bettyelgyn @nesokaiyoh @yazziixx @glubglubz Guys let me know if i did good. Thank you so much for your advices, it 's really important for me, they help grow !
Looks great! You know.. you need highlights and splash on the water ... and foam - to show the power of the movent. Hope this pic will hepl ^^
It definitely looks more dynamic, with the water coming out. It does look like now she's not even holding the spear however because of it being covered in water lol so finding that balance
Ok for today it's all, if i have to fix something i will do tomorrow , i'm trying my best and it'a a challenge, i hope to improve my kills in the future thank you again guys !
I feel the same way man! To me, even if I don't win its still worth it because I always end up growing as an artist. Just keep pushing yourself. Its all about gaining that tasty XP! =)
You've made big improvements today that's really cool !
You may want to readd a bit of light under water. It feel like a very heavy liquid right now (Maybe it's the kind of texture you want ?) Another thing is the water splash which look a bit like chantilly cream right now. You need to add more reflections and transparency.
But hell yeah it's really coming together !
Looks way better but this is the older version of the arm correct? Also I think it'll look cool if you keep the lights on the trident under water, to add a bit of glow under there, and some splashes at the top. I love how her face looks, goodlluck!
No, i fixed the arms, i will post the line so i can show you if it's correct
You right il will try with all my possibilities to fixit, and can put more light in the water but in font of here thrte is her shadow, cause of the sunset
Yes of course !
I could showcase you some easy post prod colours and value adjustments.
Ok, with fresh eyes i tryed again to fix the water and the weapon and the arm. @Oceane_Roh @bettyelgyn @yazziixx @glubglubz @nesokaiyoh
My eyes might be playing tricks on me, but the spear's handle seems off. The edges of the handle look wobbly, and the backend of the spear handle doesn't seem to align properly with the other end coming out of her hand.
O! that's better! Sorry - I'm rather picky but did you flip the pic? Flip it and you'll see the problem with weapon. It's handle is curved. Do the stright line over - in separete layer and then correct the handle. It's very often problem even in pics of pro-artists with lo-o-ong practice. Also, make this handle more stout . Look for references. If you need I'll give you 
What you mean with " more stout" ?
it's too thin 
make it more... heavy! 
Guys, i don't know, maybe i can't better then this i don't know what to do anymore, as always just let me know @bettyelgyn @Oceane_Roh @yazziixx @glubglubz
