I like it even more now! (although I would still push a little bit bit more the focal point, but at this point, i guess it's just me)
But, the robot soldier at the bottom right makes the eye of the viewer look outside of the illustration , I would advise to make him look to the golem insted and if it is still going to have those light, they should be dimed as well.
I hope it helps!
@mr_dessin @rgdraw @Serfer thanks youso much guys
I'm going to post one last version to fix some details. Great suggestion, I would do the trick.
@arhityom @nesokaiyoh @rgdraw Thank you guys you are amazing