Jan '20

That's a great one ! Do you have work in progress ?
If I may give you some advices, I think there are some things which are a bit unclear. Is she turning the soldier in some kind of zombie or attacking them with lightning ? And then why need she to point them with her dagger.
But the mood is really great, as well as the colour palette :smile:

Jan '20

2 juliapires.jp98 thanks!
2 Oceane_Roh Thanks. In my mind, they are night elfs. And they are atacking Mage of the lightning. About dager, i'm not sure. Maybe i will change that pice.
About work in progress, I was so exided and i start paint without any researching, and some different variations. I've uploaded one additional picture in first post and reffs.

Jan '20

Oh nice! Love the lighting you've chosen. If you were willing to redo parts of it hoenstly I think it would look amazing if the horse was reacting in some way. Those old renaissance paintings where a horse is rearing against an opponent is very awe inspiring and could help with both your composition and gravity of the situation. A good example is this one:

Henri Regnault's Automedon

Notice how the horses are visibly distressed, showing a lot of emotion in their body language and faces!

Jan '20

Oh wow! yes it's really good example! I shoud bring some emoutions to the horse. Thanks a lot!

11 days later

Jan '20

Ahh that horse already looks so much better! On another feedback note I do think the girl's face could be showing more expression. I don't know if you were purposefully going for a classical "stiff upper lip" style in the painting but she doesn't look too enthused about the current situation