ART WAR 4 | 2D | War of the Elements | Illium the Thunderlight Mage | glubglubz

3dc 2020-01-19 15:13:54 UTC #46

not going to lie, that is scary!
shanene
I'll remove after you see it.

glubglubz 2020-01-19 17:10:29 UTC #47

100%

Oceane_Roh 2020-01-19 18:02:49 UTC #48

Hey I haven't really checked your entry until now !
But I'm glad I did, really cool ! Keep going

Lil_G 2020-01-23 10:29:39 UTC #49

Cant stop watching at the pure linework) Love the moon shapes idea! Good luck;3

mr_dessin 2020-01-24 09:52:16 UTC #50

You should have keep the duck face

rgdraw 2020-01-24 10:13:25 UTC #51

Hey!! I totally missed your topic until now, I had no idea you were here this year too! And with some amazing work already!! Keep up the great stuff like this!

glubglubz 2020-02-01 05:27:50 UTC #52

Between work and trying to have a social life I haven't spent as much time on this as I would have liked over the past week. Luckily for me I have no plans over the weekend so I'm going to get a lot done!

rgdraw 2020-02-01 15:06:52 UTC #53

Wonderful! Amazing progress! I love the lighting!

mr_dessin 2020-02-01 17:31:41 UTC #54

Is it a sort of sea/lake she is floating/hovering above ?
Reaally enjoy the monnument symbols on the back !

glubglubz 2020-02-01 18:01:07 UTC #55

I'm not sure yet, but I definitely like that idea. Right now it's kind of more glassy, but after I put in the reflection from her legs I'll throw some water ripples in to see how it looks.

tylervailj 2020-02-01 20:41:21 UTC #56

I really like it! My only worry is that I think in the prompt it has to be an illustration attacking or defending? I would hate to see you disqualified for that. Kind of feels like she is just floating there showing off more or less.

glubglubz 2020-02-01 21:44:11 UTC #57

I hadn't noticed that.
I'll have to give it some thought then.

mr_dessin 2020-02-02 09:35:12 UTC #58

The easiest way would be to add corpses/monsters/nemesis whatever electrified by her lightnings from each side ? (why not one under the sea with lots of lights going everywhere in the sea/lake)
But you certainly have to enlarge the canvas for this.

That's probably not the best approach, not sure...
Anyways I'm sure you could find how to deal with this.

Lil_G 2020-02-02 11:25:28 UTC #59

Good luck with the time menegment ;D She is already looking very cool) I know that there is a lot of original designs in a contest, but this is my fav

glubglubz 2020-02-03 02:32:02 UTC #60

Making room for some extra crispy corpses.

Thanks for the suggestion @mr_dessin

pylua 2020-02-03 03:35:15 UTC #61

Oh oh, now not only Illium will be a model, but she's also gonna deadly
I'm really looking forward to see the final illustration !

Tesat 2020-02-03 04:56:45 UTC #62

Who doesn't like their corpses crispy? They better be lol

glubglubz 2020-02-03 15:37:34 UTC #63

I'm trying to think about the bodies. Should they be dead soldiers, zombie creatures, monsters, or something else?

I'd really like some feedback on this. It's crunch time and I still have work in the mornings!

rgdraw 2020-02-03 18:04:35 UTC #64

I would suggest some monsters, like you said it's rush time and with monsters you can get away with proportions issues and stuff like this unlike if you try to make something humanoid
I hope this help! Good luck! You can do this!!

MarcinKulesza 2020-02-04 09:44:04 UTC #65

Hey, great work so far! Let me share some ideas with you, you are free to ignore them, but i think there is a room for improvement.
- I think the ambient, front light is too bright, the character would look better if illuminated only or mostly by the thunders from the sides.
- The background spike-like element is distracting a bit, I believe the simple starry night background would be enough.
- As an air hero, she should be flying in the ari, not walking on the ground