Agreed with all what you said here !!!
Sometimes you really want to flip the table (especailly when you see other works T-T , yours included)...and say heck, start everything from scratch again, and again, and again
Of course this is not necessarly the best choice.
Everything look so good in your piece
All the best of luck !!!
ps : also, I'm not sure if you think of it, but that would be a nice add to see some very little bolt of lightnings coming along some bodies here and there...but maybe that's too much ? don't know.