The one you did 3 days ago is better than the redone one you posted before that, although it could've worked with a different composition (felt awkward with the lack of space at the bottom considering he was pointing his gun there, and the negative space at the top was too much with nothing going on)
the chosen one! I don't have much time to do more, so I will continue with him! I have to confess, one of my biggest mistakes was to take a golem as character, I never drew one before, and I was very hard to me give him some dynamics, in my mind the metal is solid and that idea consume me, but in the end I learm alot with this one, so is a win I think
I probably give color today soo I will upgrade this at nigth.