Jan '20

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moirae

Yea agree with Tj - k looks good just remove the ammo from the cannon i think its making me think odd things tbh, trying to figure out how the cannon works if it works with chains every shot i am only seeing 1 chain, so the next shots in my head are saying they will have no chain and starts to break the situation going on for me. ' Which is shot fired hooks victim chain to keep it from running off to shot fired blank whats going on with the chain then. ' to explain it better.

But looks great, i also like that, you do not obstruct the hero with other characters in the scene and keep an action scene at the same time. So i like the idea of a ghost/jelly victim.

Jan '20

Went with K as that was my favourite anyway. Using golden spiral to figure out where to put the chain.
@3dc I think I'm going to add chains to each of the spikes still in the cannon, they're too cool to leave out.

Thoughts and comments welcome.
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Jan '20

To you moirae:
B too much chain i think on A.

To site runnners:
> Also to the site admins. idk wtf is going on but when looking at B and middle mouse scroll (press in and move entire mouse up slightly) pops me all the way back up to the K image (2-3 posts or more above his last post) it was really annoying idk why it happen but yea, not good when trying to help someone or at the very least give some sort of feed back to them.

Jan '20

Okay, getting there with the lineart

Jan '20

Nice progress. I love the sinking skeleton mobster in the BG. :smiley: Can't wait to see it all rendered.

Jan '20

Getting a feel for thew colours now. I'll worry about depth of field after I have everything harmonised. Not sure about that mine behind her, I'm putting a chain attaching it to her later, but am wondering if it's just getting in the way it was originally a way of silhouetting her.

Any other thoughts / comments welcome.

Jan '20

Cool maybe far off into the distance in a shadowy look to them was what i was thinking with the sea mines.

Jan '20

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moirae

You could really benefit with there being many more of these mines - if just the one then it doesn't fit well into the composition. There's a lot of space in the image and it happens to be behind your character and it makes the composition look a little awkward (referring also to your statement on it changing her silhouette). I also agree with 3dc in that it could do with having a bit more atmosphere between that and the character.

Jan '20

Green strands on the pink? blend between the two? too hard tbh for me to pick which would be best but if you wanted a solid color for the hair, green oddly enough is standing out more atm.

Jan '20

Went for green, although will try pink again at the end just to make sure.

Jan '20

@3dc Alt hair. Still not totally sure.

Jan '20

Nice, the mob guy somewhat floating seems a touch odd to me, it looks like he was just thrown in (the water) and idk if mob guys and pirates where in the same time-frame. (love the idea though seems like a fun active time frame.)
Him floating in place though (idk if cement does that over time?) maybe put something under him or make it feel landed in the scene. (please keep in mind i don't do this stuff i am just suggesting what might look good to help you finish it up, otherwise) this is looking better and better.

Jan '20

@3dc She's meant to be hunting drowned souls for Davy Jones, so I'm just going through all the types of underwater dead I can think of. (She's a punk in a leather jacket with dyed hair and a metal t-shirt so I'm hoping people think it's set present day.)
I'm going to add more lost souls in the background time / room permitting, just wanted to get the focal bits done first. The cement shoes guy I was thinking could move around despite encumberment like other ghosts. I can always just stick a bit of rock under him if it's confusing.

Other underwater undead ideas from anyone would be appreciated.

Feb '20

Really like your palette colour !
Keep it up.

Feb '20

Basically finished now I think, just tweaks and stuff to go. Critique still appreciated.

Feb '20

Really love the skeleton's expression, you really nailed it on the head! Composition is really good, colours are nice and the general tone is done really well. I think it could be a bit darker as it's the ocean but the lighter mood suits the comedic aspect quite well