Update ! So I changed the changed the guys in the background
I think that I spent too much time detailing them since these details will not be THAT visible after post-processing and all
Tomorrow I'm going to put the patterns on Nariko's kimono, and work a little on the background walls. After that ? Just some details, tweakings and post-processing, to add some movements and all.
I'm close (yet so far) to finally finishing it. I don't know if I'm happy with it, I guess I am , I think I've just stared at it for too long ^^
Her shadow and the dudes closest to her shadows' were better lighter, you've taken away depth by darkening them although in the newest update the lightning across the floor is super appealing to look at, and you've painted the texture of the floor so well! The floor itself though could do with something to make it a little less perfect, the lines between the boards are so perfectly straight and unbroken, and it could benefit from having horizontal slats as well
So, hello again.
Here's what I've been doing today. As I planned yesterday, I worked on the walls and applied the cloud patterns on Nariko's kimono (That. Was. A. Pain. In. The. ***) I also tried to work on "unperfecting" the floor
(Please dont mind thoses orange dots in the lightning area, I juste painted as place holders and will make it look better later.)
There is still a lot I have and want to do : Putting the lightning emblem on her kimono around the shoulder, add some dust particles, light reflections around the hair, etc etc...
ALSO !
Before going even more in the details I wanted to check real quick what the final illustration could look like with some quick post-precessing. And I need an opinion on that ^^
Here are 2 versions of it.
So here's the thing I initially wanted to add motion blur and other to add a little more depth to the illustration. Thats's what I did here :
BUT I believe that, as I gain in depth, I lose in details, so I tried without the blur :
And I can't make a choice... What do you think ? I Think that, either way, I will keep the motion blur on the first 2 water soldiers to show the impact but I don't know about the rest of the scene...
Ahh this definitely looks a lot better! I'm really loving the shadows and reflective light on the boards in the back, and the extra details really does ground the piece. It looks fantastic! I quite like the motion blur but I think either work, maybe have the middle one crisp as he's sitting next to the wall and the other two blurred? But maybe with a little less blur though it's quite harsh.
Another thing I wanted to mention is that you have a powerful light source coming from the top right, but none of it is touching her head, yet the cast shadow from her head isn't reaching that cast at the back so it doesn't make sense her head is in shadow. Other than that though it's looking really good, the lightning is painted so nicely
Thank you ! I'm gonna try every options after I'm done painting the final details
As for the shadows, I'm not sure to understand what you mean exactly (I still have some trouble with english) but I scribbled something real quick to explain the way I casted the shadow.
I've always had troubles with lighting and shadows so I might have done something wrong here.
@nesokaiyoh Ahahah ! O no
@danrob Thanks ! Yeah, I wanted to make it long since I wanted to have that kind of "sunset" light but shadows are part of my "prespective-newbie" problem
I think I can finally call it done now !
There are a few things I wanted to keep working on (like her face, something's bugging me, I just stared at it for a whole hour in my bed last night trying to figure it out... I just can't be as satisfied as I am with the faces concept illustrations I made when I started ) but unfortunately I won't be home until saturday evening, and since I don't know the hour when the contest is officially over I am going to stick with this final illustration !
EDIT : NEVER MIND i just checked the contest page, i'll be able to fix it in time I think
It was such a challenging contest ! It made me go beyond my comfort zone and it allowed me to discover some amazing artists ! THANK YOU !
(I still want to make a little animation of this illustration, I might post it here )
So sorry I couldn't explain myself very well on the shadows and other stuffs...Anyways, everything look great !
Also really like very much the paterns on kimono (and good little spot for the lightning element haha) and these poor crispy guys and all the little details everywhere !
Good luck with everythng and see you next year maybe !!!
@stepan.hells Thanks !
@mr_dessin Thank you so much ! See you next year for sure !
10 days later
Hi ! Just posting to share with you a little animation I did for this illustration !
I wanted to make it look like one of those animated splasharts in League of Legends (without as much knowledge as them )
I might try to make a speed painting / process video of this but I forgot to record a lot of painting sessions