Hey !
This is great !
I'm not sure about the way you've painted the earth symbol, I guess the part which is a bit down should be, well, down and not just a cut in the middle.
Also for the church, well I don't know if you really need a building on the back, but maybe you could look at the nordics curchs to have something a bit stronger.
13 days later
Hey! Thanks for your feedback! You are absolutely right about the symbol, I didnt really realize that, so thanks Its anyway preliminary, approximately transformed to where it should be, just so that I have some visualization of what i wanted to do.
I took a look into nordic church style and they are abolutely more suitable, very nice suggestion. I think I will for now forget about the church, but if I come back to it I think i will go with nordic style
Small update. @nesokaiyoh Thanks for the suggestions! I tried to implement what you said a bit by adding some more environment occlusion. I think there is still way to go to push it more though. Let me know if you think its on the right track
I also added some good old birdies
@Oceane_Roh Great suggestion
Did some more environment, a bit of refinement and tried to make him pulling his arm out of the earth a little bit more lively.
I am currently struggling with the pose of the firebird in that hand...
I'm not sure if I've already told you how fun I found the face of your phoenix but, Hey look amazing xD
There's a really good story telling with the add of the 2 people on the front,
I'd say you could push the render of the mountains a bit further, they look a bit disconnected from the rest of the background. You could also tweak the vegetation on it's back a bit, you could check alpine landscape.
But really cool project
I'd say it's lacking a lot of detail, as it looks a bit unfinished. For what it is though I enjoy the concept and you've done a pretty good job of indicating the scale and mass that this creature represents. The bits of dirt and rocks on the left are a super nice touch as well, as you need some smaller elements to contrast with the bigger ones. I do still feel sorry for the bird lol