ART WAR 4 | 2D | War of the Elements | TheFirstMother | 4paulpaa

[4paulpaa]

I think front side concept is done

[juliapires.jp98]

Beautiful! I just think that she needs a little bit more of light on her beautiful face... The babies look great too, I think they look best as friends!

[dreamsequenz]

Love the translucency in the hair and also your realy unique design🦾

[4paulpaa]

Now hair is flowing

Sorry I use clouds-placeholder

[nesokaiyoh]

That definitely looks a lot more like water, the colours are blindingly bright and I love them lol

[4paulpaa]

What size must be a final illustration and concept shit. I don't found this info.

[Kruzsely_Ted]

I don't think there is a size limit or anything this time. id ask the original post if you can. looking good. also some feedback. if she is a water element or is related to water. maybe introduce some water decoration/designs on her and the little guys. like starfish, shell pattern, scales or something to tie her to the water. the colors look great and the personality is there.

[Erigo]

Lovely and funny(in positive meaning) work!

[EllyettWee]

the final illustration has to be at least 2048px at one side, concept sheet isn't necessary this year so do as you like

[4paulpaa]

just to be safe

[mr_dessin]

Not sure if you remember about this rule but... We all have to depict our character(s) (either attacking or defending).

"This is WAR - Your champion should be depicted either attacking or defending!"

Seeing her pose, the easiest one could be a shield around them or something like that ?
But you certainly can found better, of course.

[4paulpaa]

She reaches right hand to the weapon in the water to protect a children

[nesokaiyoh]

I agree with dessin on that she doesn't look to be doing either, mostly just chillin in a pool with some laddies, but it's a bit late to change things around at this point, unless you could remedy it by lifting her arm up just a tad with the weapon, like holding it up in defense maybe