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Was polishing along this morning and suddenly I think I've figured out why the composition bugs me. 1. the scale of the fire dude and the earth elemental are too similar. 2. there is zero foreground in this picture :-o
Here's a fix-in-progress. I'll need to look at it later to see if I've ended up over-filling the image. I would guess I'll need quite a bit more value adjustments around the middle parts to get the value composition to work again, but I think the balance between the figures is much better. Also drew over the fire elemental to try to make his design less boring and flow better.