ARTWAR 2 | 2D | Whisper - The Light Walker | Wlkongg

alexbrewer2238 2018-01-01 20:32:15 UTC #21

Looks great so far! I think the added changes have really helped the design!

wlkongg 2018-01-01 22:48:22 UTC #22

@alexbrewer2238 Thank you Alex
So I went and added what @douglasderi suggested and turn out prettyy interesting, I'm really digging in the 2nd feet design
Thank youu @douglasderi for the feedbacks really helped me improved

Flat colours

With a little gradient

douglasderi 2018-01-02 13:04:49 UTC #23

The first one is more accurate with all body, you have choosen a hard leg pose, i have a last suggestion on that, you could put the back foot in the same level of the front foot, than you will get a front foot, try to put the ankles in the same line to fit the level. if its difficult, try to trace a line connecting the hands, so you will have the angle that you will simulate on feet.

wlkongg 2018-01-02 23:06:01 UTC #24

Big update
This is where I got up to yesterday

wlkongg 2018-01-02 23:16:03 UTC #25

Working on the extra features before I head into Illustration

@douglasderi sorry I didn't get to see your feed back, I was probably as sleep or so, since I live in Australia but I may have to pass on that suggestion but I'll save it in my notes as something I could improve and think about later on after this challenge, but I really appreciate your feedbacks it really made my design more interesting pls forgive my sins haha

douglasderi 2018-01-02 23:19:28 UTC #26

Dont worry, its a interesting character. Keep posting.

Good luck

Tesat 2018-01-02 23:21:13 UTC #27

Nice job with the flames, it's starting to look great! My advice is you can throw in some red on the flames

wlkongg 2018-01-03 00:02:19 UTC #28

Update before I head off to my part time job
@douglasderi Thaank youu
@tbrk Thank youu I seee how red goes once I come back home

Haha the glow makes me happy

wlkongg 2018-01-04 07:27:07 UTC #29

Concept is doooneee!! now time for the illustration

wlkongg 2018-01-05 10:14:11 UTC #30

Process of my illustration so far

wlkongg 2018-01-05 10:16:11 UTC #31

This illustration shows more of being in war while Whisper carries out the message about one of the base being siege, so I'm going to work with this idea and hopefully it'll turn out interesting

wlkongg 2018-01-05 11:02:10 UTC #32

This is also an interesting idea where Whisper stole the dark side's secrets weapon plans that they're going using the war, the beam is created by bunch of cultist trying to summon a giant Death worm that'll create a massive destruction on to the battlefield and the Light's base

wlkongg 2018-01-05 13:03:32 UTC #33

I made changed the layout of the canvas to see what I can do with it. I think this focuses on the character and what's going on behind him better, pretty much a redo of the base being siege.

can't really decide between giant dark beam or a giant blasted the building, it shows that the dark side has a very dangerous weapon and Whisper must warn others and try to come up with a plan to stop it.

douglasderi 2018-01-05 15:02:06 UTC #34

The first one of the right to left is my favorite, just fill the blanks with some fire actions will be cool.

wlkongg 2018-01-05 21:24:35 UTC #35

Thanks @douglasderi do you mean the 3rd panel? or the 1st panel?

douglasderi 2018-01-05 21:33:33 UTC #36

the third thumbnail from left to right on first line

wlkongg 2018-01-05 22:28:32 UTC #37

Cooolies I'll shall explore with it

alsoo what do you think of these?

wlkongg 2018-01-05 22:32:24 UTC #38

douglasderi 2018-01-05 23:32:19 UTC #39

Cool, maybe your character could be close to th viwer, you could scale him, another suggestion is to change the others characters, to be very different from the main character and take them smaller, maybe trace a fire line that remains from his feet could be good.

good luck to your character

wlkongg 2018-01-06 00:21:53 UTC #40

Thank youuu Good luck with yours tooo, can't wait to see your illustration of your character