Here are a few more versions of her. Also I thought about a quick story to really get into my characters perspective and therefore making the design fitting her character more.
Story (real quick summary) :
Before realizing her own ability she suffered from not really having a voice and nobody really caring about her. When she understood her power she wanted to be someone whos respected and adored by other people, almost like a goddess. Gaving away her soul by influencing other peoples souls she didnt even realize how demonic she had become.
hey malcom. im still in the design phase. these have nothing to do with the final illustration yet. The illustration part is also gonna be super hard for me because Im really not good with illustrations at all . Sketches and Thumbnails for the Composition are coming next so Im really looking forward to hear some critique from you then. : )
Just wanna thank all the people who gave me critic until now : ). Im still struggling with the composition... Heres another new attempt. The idea is that shes surrounded by here inferiors which are all painted black in the face to show their own irrelevance, bowing down to her. I also think I paint the metal parts of her design more iron like instead of gold.
What do you think? : )
@deivcalviz Brom is a legend! its such an honor to be compared tp someone like him. Thank you very much! Whats your favourite composition so far or what do you think I can improve?
@sanguine Thank youu : ) Im also excited to see the final result because Im not really sure where this goes either
Thanks for your feedback : ) right now I dont care too much about doing everything technical right, I just focus on a nice composition. It doesnt look good at all in my opinion and I dont now how to get this done. Or am I just overthinking and expect too much in the composition phase? Please tell me