I’ll ask it again. Can you please state the intention of your piece?
Having us be clueless to the intent/desired goal you wanted to achieve doesn’t help us help you much outside of the technical aspects. We might end up critiquing something that you intended to happen, and since it’s a wip, it might be pointless because the entire thing can change.
“I need help with how to push this further”
“I need to finish this yes yes, but is it missing something?”
“My intent is to mimic this master did I succeed?”
“(Life story skip to recipe) I want it to look like ‘this’.”
First post, and new account, welcome to the forums.