Dark Souls 3 T-shirt Design (Update)

KnH 2016-10-13 15:13:43 UTC #1

Some Dark Souls 3 fanart. This will be a T-shirt print.
I am mostly finished with the inking in Photoshop CS5. Would like to hear your thoughts on this. If I had to critique, I think it looks a little bit stiff? I was thinking to give the appearance of movement with some speed lines, or maybe more of an emphasis on the perspective in the foreground.

(Photos of the process)

kurisil 2016-10-13 18:36:34 UTC #2

Whats the resolution you're working on? The image attached is extremely blurry.

KnH 2016-10-13 20:20:39 UTC #3

The resolution is at 300 pixels/inch. I'm not sure why it is blurry on the forum attachment.

KnH 2016-10-13 20:26:48 UTC #4

Ok, I reuploaded the image.

KnH 2016-10-14 20:59:09 UTC #5

Here is the final design. I exaggerated the size of the forearm to enhance the perspective, cleaned up some of the stay marks. Added red as an accent, even included it as the "dark sigil" in the back.