Environment Critique

[nicolasscola]

Hey guys, first time around. But anyway, this is my last digital and any critique is very much accepted.

It's a StarWars based environment were there are others environments, making this huge combined painting. But let's focus on this one.

All the painels together

[malcom]

For the big piece you want feedback on, I'm not sure what the story is here. i'm not sure where you want me or other viewers to focus on as well. Maybe if you add text to the piece as if this was a blu ray or book cover might help things.
Another thing that stands out a lot is the perspective in the piece.
I did a paint over with perspective lines
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