Feedback/Help Character Illustration

[linvdmk]

Hello!
I didn't use any reference on the body and hands, only looking at my own hands and my body in the mirror. I tried to establish a focal point and a nice atmosphere. I would be very happy about some feedback. :)))

[malcom]

As far as the focal point goes, I think you did a great job. The face is really cute and is the first thing I noticed. Next is the magic she's using. So if what I mentioned lines up with what your goal was for your piece then I believe you did an amazing job. I think the anatomy is the main thing that hurts this piece the most. It breaks the illusion of a cool and simple idea. Hopefully you don't mind I did a quick Paint over

Things I think you can change is the gesture of the hands and just the anatomy of the body. I recommend using reference to fix the anatomy because it'll really help. The proportions are mostly good. Keep up the good work. This is an nice piece.

[linvdmk]

Thank you very much for your help!
I attempted to do a perspective from below, that's why I moved the breast up and hid a part of the head.
Not that I think, that I did it totally right or anything haha.
Next time I will definitely use a reference
And the vanishing points are super helpful!
Thank you for the kind words!

[malcom]

glad it helps. I was thinking you wanted to do a perspective from below. If you still wanted to do that then you can just move the perspective line down and stretch it out more so the body doesn't have to deform as much. Anyway I'm looking forward to the next update.

[linvdmk]

thank you for your help! :))