Feedback on the design

[angel.roelofs]

This is an android named Prophet. I imagine it's the main character for a short story focused game in a post-apocalyptic setting in which you encounter both beautiful and sad stories about humanity. The objective is to go to a facility where the last humans in the form of embryo's are kept alive. It's then up to Prophet to choose whether to destroy humans forever by shutting down the facility or keep them alive and welcome a new age of man!

Was wondering if anyone has feedback in terms of the design? Which parts can I exaggerate or how can I make this character easier to read? Any other tips/suggestions etc. are also welcome 🙂

[Lukiesartventure]

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This is an android named Prophet. I imagine it's the main character for a short story focused game in a post-apocalyptic setting in which you encounter both beautiful and sad stories about humanity. The objective is to go to a facility where the last humans in the form of embryo's are kept alive. It's then up to Prophet to choose whether to destroy humans forever by shutting down the facility or keep them alive and welcome a new age of man!

Was wondering if anyone has feedback in terms of the design? Which parts can I exaggerate or how can I make this character easier to read? Any other tips/suggestions etc. are also welcome 🙂

[jake.bianic]

Hey there! So I like the concept of the character, I'm guessing the missing arm is part of their story. Without bastardizing it too much I think it was just a little one shape on the torso. I'd mess around with the volumes and curves, to give it a little more of an interesting shape. I added a little extra fabric to the missing arm, as it could be a neat dynamic effect and give it some movement. I think it has a pretty cool silhouette though overall, keep it up! If you have any other characters in this world, post them up!