FINAL | ARTWAR 2 | 2D | Athacea | evehartman

[Tesat]

Nice butterfly dress, I didn't expect you to change it like this

[anthropon]

That expression is maniacal. I like it. Also, The perspective of the head is looking much better now and plays well with the look of fire in the eyes that comes from looking down wide eyed at this angle. This is a really good balance of up tilting the head and keeping her face attractive. I think a subtle repeat of the serpent theme in the jewelry would do a lot to strengthen the design language of the piece. I'm looking forward to the next post.

[evehartman]

@tbrk Thanks!
@anthropon Thank you for your constructive and kind reply! Perhaps I will change her headpiece, thanks!

Painted a little more today

[silartworks]

She is getting better and better, I like that evil smile:)

I had couple free minutes and did this sketch over:

Just because I struggle in explaining so better to show like this what I mean:)
In my opinion her torso looks short, compared with arms. Also red pen I marked places which might be tangents (maybe arm separated from edge of the dress?)

I might be wrong, not a pro at this:D

[evehartman]

@silartworks Thank you so much for your time, sketch and explanation! It helped, adjusted her pose a little bit.

I finished the illustration and card today!

I want to thank everyone for their kind replies, constructive feedback, warm comments! It has been just awesome participating in an event with such a nice community and I learned so, so much.

Thank you guys!

[Tesat]

Nice work, I like your entry. I hope to see you again in some other contest

[rgdraw]

Nice work and congrats for finishing!

[anthropon]

Good job ! I think my favorite part of your illustration is the expression on the skull. It's like he's saying "heal me!"

[sheyenne]

Nice result! Congratulations!

[evehartman]

@tbrk @rgdraw @anthropon @sheyenne Thanks guys

[rgdraw]

You're welcome