FINAL | ARTWAR 2 | 2D | The Originator | s-stark

evehartman 2018-01-28 14:55:56 UTC #41

Yeah nice! Composition really improved and I love your colour palette, great work!

s-stark 2018-01-28 23:37:07 UTC #42

alecksandrs 2018-01-31 01:39:19 UTC #43

@s-stark
Oh man! I absolutely ADORE the colors!
One thing that I can suggest tho, make your champ POP a bit, by making her brighter than BG or darker, right now she kinda blends in with BG.
(I haven't checked forums for a week+ due to lack of PC) But now Im here, and ready to post feedback, and continue my own work!
Wish you luck m8!
Keep it cool!

s-stark 2018-01-31 21:08:03 UTC #44

@alecksandrs Thanks! I plan on playing around with a few things to help her stand out a bit more. Glad to see you back and look forward to seeing your progress.

s-stark 2018-02-02 04:53:15 UTC #45

Slowly moving along.

s-stark 2018-02-03 20:22:53 UTC #46

evehartman 2018-02-03 20:46:31 UTC #47

Love how you keep adding soft details. The red backlight is very befitting as well

s-stark 2018-02-03 23:17:23 UTC #48

@evehartman Thank you. I thought the red was pretty. c:

Happy with it so far. Probably going to take a break from the illustration to work on concept sheet.

s-stark 2018-02-12 03:27:07 UTC #49

clarief 2018-02-12 07:37:47 UTC #50

Oooooo! Your work is so beautiful I really enjoy the colors and the nice variations of the other creatures too. Good job!

s-stark 2018-02-12 21:43:21 UTC #51

@ferguson-clarissa Thank you!

snakebearer 2018-02-12 22:05:46 UTC #52

Really cool design. I can really see that you're great at what you're doing. ^^
I'm trying to give some constructive crits, but it's kinda hard here. Everything is great. ^^
Only thing I can see, and that's after digging pretty deep into the bottom of the barrel, is that there are a few tangents you probably could fix. >.< Most glaring one the arm and leg in the illustration piece.
Hope that at least help you push it even more.

s-stark 2018-02-12 22:29:28 UTC #53

@snakebearer Thanks! I think I see what you're saying about the arm/leg tangent. I had to look up what a tangent was so my understanding might not be great lol. Just to clarify though the bottom left (her left) arm and the left leg are tangent?

snakebearer 2018-02-12 22:39:48 UTC #54

Yeh, the leg is tangent with both the lower arm and hand. Since it turns just at the same line where the arm also turns. And you can even see the lines of the finger just follow the leg line as well. My suggestion would be to just lasso the arm, place the anchor point in the elbow and turn it slightly. Like I said, this is being nitpicky really. XD But since you're already doing so great, it'd be a shame if you didn't do all you can with a little push.

s-stark 2018-02-15 08:20:10 UTC #55

@snakebearer Definitely appreciate the feedback as well as explanation! I made a tweak so hopefully it made it better.

For the time being I'm calling the illustration done.

s-stark 2018-02-22 23:22:49 UTC #56

Still some small things I want to work on but hoping to finish soon.

s-stark 2018-02-24 01:37:11 UTC #57

Made a small edit to the final illustration. Otherwise tentatively done unless I decide on last minute edits.

mr_dessin 2018-03-01 19:44:07 UTC #58

Super late on this but that's very cool, I really enjoy your colour choices and your super weirdo character !
Good luck to you

s-stark 2018-03-01 22:40:56 UTC #59

@mr_dessin Thank you! I was wondering which corner of the internet you ventured off to. xD

Anatomic 2018-03-06 10:13:13 UTC #60

Dude your character sheet is soooo freaking good! Great work on the illustration aswell