I need all the help possible please

[the_last_enemy_x]

Hello my name is eduardo and in the illustration I am self taught, I have uploaded my last practice since I need people with more experience tell me the points to improve please, since I need this to reach a higher level , any detail or error that See, do not hesitate to tell me, everything will serve for the better: D, good day to all.

[yazziixx]

Nice! I like the cultural mood here. His right eye is a bit weird looking thought you need to fix it, theres a black dot that comes out of the lower eyelid which makes it look a bit off. His face is more desaturated than the rest of the painting so maybe try darkening areas like under his nose, the lip line, even go as dark as a black color. Also the shading on his head scarf are very rough looking so I'd suggest go in and smooth them out? good luck.

[tiia]

Looking good, but I'm thinking the dark shadows under his chin and by the ears are too black? I think they should be lightly lighter than the background black. The light parts aren't bright enough to throw that dark of shadows.