Hey all! My name is Jon I'm 25 going Raised in Florida interested in art. If anyone would like to study art or has any feedback when I post I appreciate all of it! ( I WILL BE UPDATING AS I GO) Best of luck to everyone!
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Work on different poses!
I tried to reproduce what marc did for perspective 1, definitely fun to do, id never tried anything like it before.
Welcome to the forum Jon, that perspective drawing looks really cool, keep it up, cant wait to see you get better ^^ 👍
I tried recreating the face marc made in Anatomy 1
Welcome to the forums Jon! I look forward to seeing your progress and I really like what I see so far! Keep it up!
1 month later
Back to Practice again after a month break due to exams and a move! hope to start posting more frequently
Some guys I saw on DeviantArt wanted to practice sketching them!
3 point Perspective any feedback would be appreciated! This was fun to lean 
Hey Jon this looks pretty neat 😲👍
There are some minor things I wanted to mention:
First of all I tried to reproduce the vanishing points and it looks like you have 3, but maybe I did something wrong there? xD I don't know 🙈
Nevertheless there are some lines which go to the wrong vanishing point 🧐 I've marked them 😄
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Another little thing is about the shadows on the stairs in the front. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think when a shadow goes about several volumes, which form in different directions, the shadow forms according to the volume. Sooo what I mean is that your shadow goes in a straight line over some of the steps and therefore doesn't show the depth of the steps. Same goes for the wall at the right, to show some depth the shadow in the front and in the back should be a bit offset :}
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Overall I really like this piece because you used many different shapes and added nice details. This makes it really interesting to look at and I wonder where this gate would bring me if I'd cross it 👀✨
I hope this makes sense and helps a little bit 😄
Keep up the great work 🔥
Hey Prinzmoana I appreciate the feedback, as for the vanishing points you pretty much nailed them! This was a first attempt at 3 point perspective assignment so I'm glad its going over well :D.
I haven't actually worked on shading or lighting yet, I hope to get there eventually get there (I mostly tried to reproduce what marc did to the best of my abilities) Again Thank you so much for your feedback I will definitely incorporate it into the next study <3
Oh I see xD
In the end shading wasn't even a proper part of this exercise xD But therefore you did pretty good 😊
Btw I love Killua ;}
Some more work with perspective feedback is always appreciated!
1 month later
New tablet, wanted to go back and practice term 1 again (any feedback appreciated! )
Some skeletons from imagination the proportions aren't the best and the cylinders are going in some wrong directions but hey I'm proud of it, getting better every day as they say 
Decided to work on some facial expressions let me know what yall think!
Working on head shapes for term 2
