Lilia- Art School Journey

design.liliarae 2020-08-09 20:40:03 UTC #21

My latest 2 point perspective study that I went a bit overboard on 😅
I think I feel comfortable enough to start moving on to the 2nd term and I'm super excited!

design.liliarae 2020-08-15 19:25:44 UTC #22

design.liliarae 2020-08-21 05:04:38 UTC #24

design.liliarae 2020-08-23 02:19:16 UTC #25

I've been working through Term 2 and here are some of my studies from Anatomy 1! Let me know what you guys think I'd love some feedback!

WeirdOwl 2020-08-23 16:18:08 UTC #26

The freckles are such a nice touch.

design.liliarae 2020-08-23 18:38:38 UTC #27

Thank you Viktoriya!

dangras-almeida 2020-08-25 04:41:16 UTC #28

Awesome!!!

design.liliarae 2020-08-27 16:04:45 UTC #29

Thank you!

design.liliarae 2020-08-27 19:52:17 UTC #30

Hello everyone! I hope you are all doing well!
I have been working on more head studies and I would love any feedback you guys have!

The one in the middle of the top row and the one on the bottom left gave me a lot of trouble and I still feel like they look weird, if you have any tips or critiques I'd really, really appreciate it! Thank you guys so, so much

WeirdOwl 2020-08-28 02:36:02 UTC #31

I see what you mean about those heads not looking exactly right. Those are tough angles. I did a quick check, and you mostly nailed it, it's just the slight curves of the nose that make them look weird and the ear positions. Hope this helps.

boscoheron 2020-08-28 03:19:38 UTC #32

Hey, it's cool to see what will be worked on in Unit 1. The way you colour skin looks great!

design.liliarae 2020-08-29 17:04:07 UTC #33

@WeirdOwl Thank you so much for your help!! That was so kind of you do that for me, I'll definitely go back and try to tweak them today before the live stream!

@boscoheron Thank you so much! I'm super excited to keep going!

design.liliarae 2020-09-06 03:32:45 UTC #34

Three point perspective work in progress! Let me know what you think, the scene still feels pretty empty to me...

chiara.arcidiaco 2020-09-06 10:24:22 UTC #35

mayyybe it feels empty because there is no a real focal point? I think that you could probably put something in far distance to attract the eye and maybe add a bit of storytelling. But for the proportion class itself this is very good

design.liliarae 2020-09-06 17:13:39 UTC #36

thank you, that's a great idea! Yeah you're totally right I kinda just didn't add a focal point, I can't believe I didn't notice that 😅

design.liliarae 2020-09-06 22:08:13 UTC #37

I finally finished my 1-point perspective room! Let me know what you think!

Frygidal 2020-09-06 22:55:35 UTC #38

Lovely colors and mood! Attention to details is top-notch as well, very succesful piece, I would only add some reflections in glass because the frames look now pretty empty and that's my only critic

WeirdOwl 2020-09-07 00:20:19 UTC #39

Overachiever much? That looks really good though! Add a little more defined shadows from the objects closer to the window maybe?

chiara.arcidiaco 2020-09-07 20:34:46 UTC #40

that is, breathtaking haha the light makes me feel so relaxed one strangy thing is that some elements in the background have more details than others in the foreground, like books and frames are so detailed to be far away.

But apart from that I could never be as able to do this room, awesome Lilia

design.liliarae 2020-09-08 04:21:20 UTC #41

@pitrek121 Thank you so much!! Yes thank you for the idea, I definitely agree about the reflections in the glass, I think that would add a lot more believability to them!

@WeirdOwl Thank you so much, haha I spent way too long on this yeah you are totally right about the shadows, I think that would help that area a lot, it was giving me trouble for sure. Thank you

@chiara.arcidiaco Thank you so much, that's so kind of you
I definitely agree about the books, I did them really zoomed in and got kinda caught in the weeds I think between fixing that and adding more shadows like @WeirdOwl suggested, that would help with the depth of the image a lot!

Thank you guys so, so much for your help! I really, really appreciate it