Looking for critique for my fairy!

linvdmk 2020-03-01 20:50:23 UTC #1

I redesigned an old character
I tried to make a dynamic pose and a friendly expression and make it very colorful, but not too excessive hehe.
I would be very happy about some critique! :)))

cedricgo 2020-03-04 01:45:52 UTC #2

I think the rendering is really nice. I also like the color palette. I feel like the stomach are could be a little bit longer because it feels like her chest goes almost immediately into her pelvis, but the main problem I'm noticing is the leg going backward.

It's a bit of a tricky angle, but right now it looks like she's both bending her leg backwards and sideways which is weird.

I think an angle like I did above would work better. It seems like the position of the foot is probably the main issue, but I think part of the shading of the leg also create the illusion that the leg is in the wrong angle.

So that would be my main critique. Keep up the good work!

linvdmk 2020-03-05 11:08:27 UTC #3

Ohh thank you very much! Thanks for showing it with the boxes, those make it so much easier to visualize the perspective! I have to start using those!

cerebro-iv 2020-03-30 09:22:24 UTC #4

As the other poster has said above it does seem like her chest and pelvis feel a bit off. I'm also wondering about the colours on her hands and feet, is that purple/pink colour her natural skin colour or is it in shadow.