Patricia - Art School Journey

[daceronine]

Oy that looks great! I can definetly see Ayami's influence there, especially with the nose, eyes and lips. I do feel the lips in the final potrait ended up a bit more... "squished"? (probably not the right word), just a tad smaller from side to side and more "full" than in the sketch. Ayami's lips are usually smaller up down, and wider left right.

The overall face strucuture is also a bit wider, Ayami's are quite more triangular and thinner.

Which, by the by, doesn't mean you have to match her, since this is obviously your character, just pointing out the little differences in style.

The BG is great though, really contrasts well with the blue. This could easily fit into a Castlevania piece.

Very charming bouncing ball too

[patrycja.lerch]

Thank you!

I do feel the lips in the final potrait ended up a bit more... "squished"? (probably not the right word), just a tad smaller from side to side and more "full" than in the sketch. Ayami's lips are usually smaller up down, and wider left right.

Oh thank you! I couldn't tell what's wrong. I redrew lips so many times that I stopped seeing what I was doing. Probably were good on first time and then I started 'fixing'

I wasn't aiming to fully copy Ayami style more like mixing it with what I already have

[mitsuki-youko]

Tried animating in Krita. I didn't expect to enjoy seeing that ball bounce so much.

I Love it!!

The study looks great too

I would challenge you, if you're up for it, to do it Z-axis!

My first animation in college (Prompt was to draw a ball bouncing)

(If you're curious, the playlist has all the stuff i animated in college - cept the last one that one was just a few years ago... tho college was also just a few years ago XD)

lolol started watching everything on the playlist and its so nostalgic XD I used to animate everywhere.. now i barely do it cuz my expectations are too high.. back then i just did whatever whenever and had like zero expectations...

[alejorey.1995]

Beautiful and stunning!

[gregorya]

I like the portrait. I wonder what happened to her horn and left eye.
Nice ball animation. Is that challenging to animate?

[patrycja.lerch]

Thank you @mitsuki-youko, @alejorey.1995 and @gregorya!

I wonder what happened to her horn and left eye. Nice ball animation. Is that challenging to animate?

Last time I couldn't draw that horn so I broke it (didn't finish that painting) and it added to already tragic backstory. He was in a tight spot and there was noone to save him so he gave into dark power and got a cool eye

Ayami's lips are usually smaller up down, and wider left right.

Thank you! This helped

Changed lips. I stared at it for so long that I didn't see a difference but I like this one better.

Is that challenging to animate?

This one was pretty simple. And right now I just copy others and try to do it myself later. It gets harder as I add perspective and other things to it

My first animation in college (Prompt was to draw a ball bouncing)

This looks cute! Loved all of them

I would challenge you, if you're up for it, to do it Z-axis!

Challenge accepted
Need to keep size in mind. When it is in one size I will make it smaller as there are more frames close. Timing and spacing too but no need to take care of everything immediately.
Bottom ones were harder to do but I like how bottom left lands at the end

More animations to come. I have fun with this

Had a strong urge to paint this today for no reason. It was a good practice I like how it came out.

Obviously had to paint Shrek as well i didn't expect it to be so hard. So Ignore him he looked much worse earlier. From far he looks fine. I still can't stop laughing. it feels so magical

Have a good day!

[daceronine]

Great work! When I saw the potrait in instagram, I actually immediately noticed the difference in the lips. I do feel it looks better! It's subtle for sure though.

All animations you guys have done look like a lot of fun! Really makes me want to give it a shot. Alas, too much on my real life plate for now though. Someday.

The shrek piece looks great!! very well done, and very much your style. I really like it! Great colors, combinations and lighting!

[mitsuki-youko]

OH HELL YEA!!! I love these animations!! esp the perspective lines you put up!! the studies were great too!

for the middle left one (45 degree angle towards camera) it feels like the ball starts bouncing fast but ends slow - imo that change is a bit sudden. less noticable on the one to the right of it tho but still, great job!

[gregorya]

Last time I couldn't draw that horn so I broke it (didn't finish that painting) and it added to an already tragic backstory. He was in a tight spot and there was no one to save him so he gave in dark power and got a cool eye

I see. That's interesting how you got a story about him with the destroyed horn.
Nice work on the animation.
Nice work on the Shrek painting.

[patrycja.lerch]

Thank you very much @daceronine, @mitsuki-youko and @gregorya!

I don't know what is up with me this week but I have so much hatred towards myself right now. I can't focus for a longer time, I can't start a painting. I hate all of my works, my style, everything. Again my expectations go too high... it is what it is.

I have all these bad thoughts but still do a lot of work. Lots of studies, lots of writing, designing. Like what I am even complaining about?!

Anatomy studies because something broke in my brain when I tried to clean up some thumbnails.

Mermay thumbnails that I can't clean up. I have more but these are my favourite. I like the bottom right but I don't know what to do with arms. He looks at the boat and is happy to see person in it. I thought about making another where you look at the guy in boat from top

Haven't painted traditionally in a long while and I used gouache only once but I like it. Colors got more saturated on photo. Blue isn't so intense. Values are pretty messed up and it all blends together. But I don't know if I want to fix it I might ruin it and it isn't that bad. I was afraid it will look worse than my last trad painting from last year but it does not. There was one moment when I decided to change whole color scheme mid painting so I glazed it with bright orange and instantly regreted it. I can't even mix such colors why would i do that where undo button

And Narfi portrait.... I don't like it. Overall it feels nice but I just don't like it. I struggled a lot and something is off about it. I can see that something is wrong with the face but I can't tell what. Maybe seeing her in such a light mood feels different. And it was supposed to be 'fun painting to chill'...

Enough of my bad mood. Next week will be better! Have a great day and weekend!

[daceronine]

Sorry to hear you've been feeling down, but rest assured, your art is amazing!

There could be many reasons one can feel like that, but I think it would be a disservice to try to guess, all I can I say is hope you feel better about it. As you said, next week it's sure to be better!

I guess I can share that when I feel like that (I guess we all do at some point) I usually try to do stuff outside of painting. For me, I play games, as I love playing games, or watching anime. I'll usually also try to put some extra attention on self care, like exercice, diet, extra sleep, getting work done and so on.

The painting with gouch is really nice though! It's "simple", but the color combination and bursh work is really nice. And did I understand right that it's physical? it's GREAT for a physical work.

And the potrait also looks nice! As usual I love the brushwork, and the warm lighting contrast very well with the cool colors. Overall it's just pleasant to look at. I really can't find anything off with the face either.

[uggievang]

And Narfi portrait.... I don't like it. Overall it feels nice but I just don't like it. I struggled a lot and something is off about it. I can see that something is wrong with the face but I can't tell what. Maybe seeing her in such a light mood feels different. And it was supposed to be 'fun painting to chill'...

Oh yea the feeling of hating everything you draw is super relatable. As for the painting I think a big part of why it feels off is the huge negative space on the right something is missing in the composition. When I look at the painting I see you made a composition in the shape of the golden spiral but you are missing something to truly draw your gaze from the top right hand corner to the face so your eyes are kinda left looking into the empty space. Now I can see if that was your intention but I think it needs something to draw your eyes to Narfi's face which is the focal point of your image. You could put her hand or make her hair flow into the stars more or something in that ball park I found this awesome video explain the golden spiral in more detail

[mitsuki-youko]

Again my expectations go too high... it is what it is.

Haha me too...... me trying to make music: I've made 4 songs b 4 but why am i not coming up with anything good rn XD

also me: well can't squeeze it out, maybe i should just chill n have fun and it'll come more naturally.

Narfi looks great! to push it even more, you could have the hair flowing upwards to flow with the curve up

I can see that something is wrong with the face but I can't tell what.

Perhaps the eye is a bit too high or the nose too long

Her hair blends in with the bg a lot (unless thats intentional)

Ya know............... for some reason i think she looks better flipped idk why tho XD

It just feels like it flows so much better this way imo

[patrycja.lerch]

Thank you very much @daceronine, @uggievang and @mitsuki-youko!

There is a lot of things I can't control and stuff I shouldn't think about. But I keep thinking and stressing about it.... it will pass after few days

I guess I can share that when I feel like that (I guess we all do at some point) I usually try to do stuff outside of painting. For me, I play games, as I love playing games, or watching anime. I'll usually also try to put some extra attention on self care, like exercice, diet, extra sleep, getting work done and so on.

I could use something that isn't art. Even if I play or watch something I will be all about art. I literally hold pen in hand all the time.And I I should take better care of myself

The painting with gouch is really nice though! It's "simple", but the color combination and bursh work is really nice. And did I understand right that it's physical? it's GREAT for a physical work.

Thank you!

As for the painting I think a big part of why it feels off is the huge negative space on the right something is missing in the composition.

These two paintings are supposed to be together. I thought about using it as a banner or something. So there is sort of golden spiral for individual pieces and together they stare at each other. But I will fix flow on Narfi one

Perhaps the eye is a bit too high or the nose too long

It might be the case will look into it again

Ya know............... for some reason i think she looks better flipped idk why tho XD

It just feels like it flows so much better this way imo

I spent more time painting it on flipped side I feel it too

Hair are supposed to blend in. Like it is fading and merging with night sky. But I think I will change it a bit

Thank you for the help! I will try to change it

[mitsuki-youko]

Ooh this looks great!

tho her jaw is pretty sharp so at first i thought this was a different painting meant to contrast the orig cuz i thought it was a guy at first XD (or is this the other side of the painting? if so that would be pretty cool too)

oooh is it supposed to be like this?

Edit:

These two paintings are supposed to be together. I thought about using it as a banner or something. So there is sort of golden spiral for individual pieces and together they stare at each other. But I will fix flow on Narfi one

Oh Duh XD totally missed this part

[patrycja.lerch]

Thank you @mitsuki-youko!

Yellow one is a guy. Sun god named is Devah

I'm starting to feel better

Went back to it. I don't hate it that much anymore. Sprinkled it with love I couldn't find before. They look cute together shame I divorced them. And it is nice to see Narfi as a happy non bloodcraving goddess she once was.

I merged it instead of changing individual. Did some liquify on face. Added a bit of glow behind Narfi as Devah has big white halo. And added more details to hair

Studies! Continuing with anatomy. I try to pay more attention how movement of one thing affect the rest. Like poking shoulder/hip that way. Arrows are to show which hip goes up and where weight is distributed because I tend to forget about it. I still hate arms and backview... but we will get this!

refs are from New masters academy I forgot about this channel


And another mermay sketch. An innocent curious girl picking up everything she finds in sunken ships. I had this palette with light mood but I automatically go for dark blues/purples. Amulet emits some dark power and she is hypnotised. She should look at that thing and not hand. And maybe she could hold it higher. I still want to use the sketches from earlier but I like colors here

Have a beautiful day!

[daceronine]

Hey they do look pretty cool like that! Seems like the overall idea is coming together!

Nice studies too!

An innocent curious girl picking up everything she finds in sunken ships

huh that kinda sounds familiar. I think I saw a movie about that xD
Sketches and idea looks cool though! Interesting color composition for the dark necklace. Very ominous.

[mitsuki-youko]

Eyyy noice!

They look cute together shame I divorced them.

RIP lol

[uggievang]

Ah very nice to see it together it looks very nice

[gregorya]

Hopefully, you'll feel better. I like the work on the first and fourth thumbnails.

They look cute together shame I divorced them.

I like the painting it's really good as well as the portrait.
They look better merged. Why are they divorced?
The studies look pretty good.
I like the Mermey sketch. The colors look great for both of them.