tonight's look a little messy because I re did this at triple the speed as the first because i messed up the save the first time and my pen was acting different and the quality seemed to have changed. but it is just practice and as long as I understand what I'm doing and how to place the cylinders I guess it doesn't matter.
Male is looking really good, female is looking a bit boxy. I would say on the female bring the shoulders in a bit, if the shoulders are further out than the hips it will look manly. Also I would cut the calf size down on female also, give it more of that curvy shape that your male has. Overall for your first time on proportions this is very good! Keep up the good work!