yo looking good, noticing some improvement for sure.
When you draw these, do you start with a sketch? I think it can be really helpful to sketch at least some proportion lines, a brow line and a midline. Also, do note, you don't have to outline everything, sometimes implied line speaks more clearly to our minds, especially in ink. For example, note how prominent ink artists render lips, many will just suggest the shape of the lips with few lines. In general, avoiding "symbolic" or "symbolic-like" outlines helps the image read more 3-dimensional, same with eyes, gotta be careful with almond shapes and always keep in mind the 3d nature of the entire eye, vary that line width and keep at it
cheers
