I think it did, definitely something you gotta just keep practicing over time, you have some searching lines, you have a few areas that are busy but overall it reads. Nose and eyes are a bit small and leaving the construction lines for the glabella so strongly can detract from the end result, some areas are showing wobbly lines (contour areas) and some show scratchy lines so maybe you need to practice simplifying some areas into lines or strokes you can confidently make with one or two fell swoops. Remember to draw as big as possible and work with all your arm
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