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I have spent alot of time making notes and reflecting on my work.
When drawing this I realised the problems I have
but the issue I have is that even though I recognise some of the issues I do not know how to fix them. For the proportions I can measure, but I can't get the actual shape of the eyes right, or recognise the subtly of a line to draw it accuratly. I'd appreciate any help with this